Welcome readers! I'm back after an unplanned break due to an intrusion from my "day job." That's the trouble with those pesky things... Occasionally they take over life.
I'm choosing to do something this week I usually don't do, but I have a good reason, so I hope you'll all forgive me. Usually, I don't start posting a new story until I've finished the one I'm working on. HOWEVER... my gorgeous, wonderful, incredible, and very new husband turned 26 this week (Happy Birthday, Brandon!!) and this new story is a gift for him. You all will simply have to deal with my romanticism. What can I say? I'm in love.
Once this story has finished, I'll return to The Forest Lord and finish it up.
Without further ado... a gift for my greatest gift.
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BIRTH
DAY Part One
By
Tucker McCallahan
This
is a work of fiction. All rights reserved. © 2015
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He
ran as if chased by demons.
I
tracked him as he streaked down the sidewalk. His hair absorbed the moonlight
and glistened like new fallen snow. Obstacles in his path seemed to melt out of
his way as he ran.
I stood transfixed. I wasn’t sure if he was guided by
skill or luck, but he was the kind of beautiful that hurt my heart.
He
was tiny, maybe five and a half feet tall though I was a bad judge of height being
blessed with such an overabundance of it. Everyone seemed short to me. His
dirty bare feet barely whispered as they padded over the broken asphalt and
concrete. A ragged pair of baggy jeans held up by a piece of leather cord hung
off his narrow hips and even at this distance I could easily count his rib
bones pushing against his thin, translucent skin as he fled from something I
couldn’t see.
For
some reason he enchanted me. As a matter of fact, the longer I stared at the running
boy, the more he beguiled me.
I
should’ve gone home. I could’ve made a pot of hot, sweet Stygian tea and gone
out to my small aeroponic garden to tend a few of my experiments. I had work. I
could’ve pretended to do it. More likely I’d end up hunched over a set of pages
at my desk, glasses slipping down the bridge of my nose as I searched for some
esoteric or strange piece of information from before the Rising that might
provide answers.
I
glanced at the beat-up satchel slung across my body. My insane trek into the abandoned
ruins of Old Philly had been a complete waste; I hadn’t found anything I needed.
Looking up, I saw the running boy had finally stopped and was bent at the waist
trying to catch his breath. Staring at his petite form bathed in starlight, I
couldn’t help but think maybe I’d found exactly
what I needed.
I
made noise as I approached. As I expected, the boy nearly jumped out of his
skin when he looked up and saw me. Terror was etched into his face. One second
before he launched into another midnight marathon, I spoke to him.
“It’s
OK. I’m not going to hurt you.”
I
spoke the words first in Chinean, then in Spantino, and finally in Mericano. Suspicion
rippled across his sharply triangular face. His eyes were the most vivid,
captivating and extraordinary blue. “Are you hurt?” Once again, I repeated my
question in all three languages, unsure of which he actually understood.
He
frowned, those huge blue eyes flicking over me, taking in my worn satchel,
boots, coat, and no doubt the bulge of the guns under it. His head cocked to
one side like a bird’s, and I realized after he did it that his ear, just
visible under his shock of tangled, shaggy, shoulder-length white hair, was
slightly elongated. It swiveled, tilting toward me and then back like a
long-distance spying device. I swallowed, my pulse kicking into high gear.
He was either
Risen, or Altered.
“I’m
a doctor. If you’re hurt I can help you.”
“Not hurt.” He spoke Mericano but with a soft,
twangy accent. I’d bet one of my better magnifying lenses it wasn’t his first
language.
I
nodded and glanced around quickly to check the surrounding streets. I needed to
leave. The first patrol would burn through in a matter of minutes. If I didn’t
make it out to the safe distance point, I’d end up a pile of ash, and all my
work would be in vain. I glanced back at the boy and found him staring holes
through me.
Standing
to my full height, I extended a hand to him.
“We
have to go.”
When
he just continued to stare, I took a deep breath and prayed silently for
patience. My eyes darted around until I found what I was looking for, and I
pointed at it, albeit a bit dramatically.
“Do
you see that? If we don’t go, now, we’ll
end up just like that.”
The
boy’s amazing blue eyes slid the length of my arm and focused on the pile of soft
gray ashes about two feet in diameter and one foot high.
“Where
is it you wish to go?” he asked.
“My
home. You-” My cheeks heated. I couldn’t believe it. I was fifty-four years
old. A medical doctor and researcher. Survivor of the Rising. I hadn’t blushed
for any reason whatsoever in longer than I could remember. But the notion of
having this half-naked boy in my home sent heat flaring through my face. The
idea generated heat throughout most of me, actually, it made me stupid.
He
cocked his head again in that birdlike pose. “But you did not get that which
you came here seeking.”
My
hands went to the butts of my Tec 9 submachine pistols. “How did you…?”
His
eyelashes fluttered as he lowered his eyes and bowed his head. His entire body
took on a pose of contrition, and when he spoke, it was barely a whisper.
“Your
bag is empty.”
I
let go of my guns, a slightly hysterical giggle escaping my lips. “Yes. You’re
right.” The uneasiness of our time crunch struck me again. I began backing up. “Look,
we really have to go.”
He
nodded and without another word, we left the ruins of Old Philly behind.
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Be Well ~ Tux
My Husband,
ReplyDeleteno words can say just how much this gift means to me ,,,your everything to me.. my mate, my friend, my love and my husband...I love you more than life itself and more than i could ever say...thank you for the best gift ever...your love..... i love you always...--brans
My Beloved King,
ReplyDeleteI was so surprised to see the new story! The first impression? You’re disgustingly in love and it feels almost weird to read it and write a comment because of that feeling of being an intruder ;-).
The impression after few moments? I am lost! It felt like taking just a small lick over a luscious and delicious body and then being denied to explore more. Tucker, that’s super mean! For now, I have no idea what is going on so commenting is seriously hard. We have there a petite, enchanting boy who seems to be chased and a tall, middle-aged man who is a doctor and a researcher of some kind and who suddenly rediscovered blushing instead of picking up whatever he was originally searching for… And for some reason the doc is taking the boy home.
Sounds interesting to me so with all my curiosity, I’m going to read another part right now. Especially that I need answers as much as the doc need his about the time before Rising – if it is even the right way to interpret his need of information from before Rising because it could be understood in more than one way, imho.
Lots of love
Iza
P.S.
Oh how much I love those descriptions of yours -> His dirty bare feet barely whispered as they padded over the broken asphalt and concrete. Beautiful! Gives me that delightful tingling all over the body when I see something that stimulates my imagination and pleases my aesthetic needs ;-). Thank you!
My Beloved Queen Iza,
DeleteAs always you are astute. It's difficult for me to do flash fiction or anything that's so short because I do have such a love for language. I have a wicked bad tendency to overwrite. In my regular work that's not such a bad thing because I can always edit the "fat" away, but with these Flash pieces, I'm usually posting them up with no more than a cursory second glance. So yeah, definitely uncharted territory. But that's what makes a writer grow - experimenting with new things.
And yes. I am disgustingly in love. *grins* thank you.
Love to you and yours, Gorgeous One ~
Tux