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My toes were completely
frozen; I couldn’t feel them at all inside my steel-toed boots. Stupid choice,
but the Doc Martens looked tuff with the rest of the outfit, and like a true
fag, I sacrificed comfort for fashion. I drew the line at the fingerless
gloves, though. Those were just too
homeless, too grunge-ago for me to even bother trying to pull them off. Besides,
it was really fucking cold out here, and my fingers were numb inside the black
leather Thinsulate driving gloves I wore.
I stood in a field. That’s
what it was, all pretenses aside, a big field out in the middle of Nowhere
Pennsylvania, where a decent crowd of about three dozen gathered as the witching
hour drew ever nearer. A bonfire burned off to one side giving us both heat and
light, though there wasn’t nearly enough of either to suit me. The booze flowed
freely, and a blue haze of cigarette smoke bolstered by other, thicker smoky
textures hung around the crowd of post-adolescent men and women milling about,
waiting to be dazzled. We all waited for the appearance of Paolo Strakos.
“He’ll be pissed about
the fire.” Denny whined at us, the emo mop of his black hair falling into his
eyes as he dashed a frantic glance at the bonfire.
“Too fucking bad,” one of
the rugby boys growled, hands shoved in his letterman’s jacket. “It’s fucking
cold out here.”
“Well, don’t say I didn’t
warn you.” Denny’s nasally whine was so goddamned annoying even I wanted to
smack him.
The black Escalade rolled
up, chrome spinning, windows dark, old Nine Inch Nails blasting that Trent wanted to fuck us
all like animals. I shivered. That song always gave me a semi. The driver’s
side window hummed down and Denny went scurrying over like the little
bootlicker he was, that stupid haircut of his all but blinding him as it
flopped into his eyes again.
“I told them,” Denny whined loudly. He stumbled back as whoever drove
shoved him hard. He dashed a hand across his lip as though checking for blood,
of which there was none, but he was a total drama queen. He slunk back up to
the window. After another quiet exchange he returned to us, shoulders hunched,
looking like a thoroughly beaten dog, though that’s not what I saw.
But on to that in a
moment.
“He says you have to put
the fire out or he’s leaving,” Denny said, authority in his voice. “And then
everybody has to get into rows of six people, just like I said the first time.”
The grumbling was
pronounced, but the jocks moved to douse the bonfire with the water from the
coolers and the snow that was still deep in the shady areas. The rest of us
dutifully lined up, and I jostled my way to a spot in the first row. This was
far from the first time I’d come to one of these little midnight soirees. As a
matter of fact, I was a regular repeat attendee, which disturbed me on a
visceral level. I only knew that I was tired of the club scene, tired of the
bar scene, tired of one night stands and anonymous fucks, and I wanted to see
something exciting, wanted to see something that really proved there was more
to life than fast food and reality TV.
Paolo Strakos was all the
proof I needed, and I kept coming back for more.
Denny was in his element,
now. He loved this, his time to shine. His eyes were fever-bright, and his lips
were swollen, though whether that was from him chewing on them or from the
driver of the car smacking him no one could tell. He actually had the balls to
put his hands on several of the jocks as he moved them from one line to
another, snarking at them about their inability to count to six. God he was getting
bold. Then he slipped on a patch of snow and stumbled into the girl next to me.
Righting himself, his warm hazel eyes met my light green eyes, and for a moment,
Denny looked at me like he knew. His
gaze sharpened, then softened, then grew as frosty as the temperature around
us, his hazel eyes narrowing suspiciously. His brown nose snapped up and he
twitched his tight little ass back over to where the bonfire was being
summarily dispensed. I did my best not to laugh at the little twink.
The great hissing rush as
the water and cold snow hit the bonfire was immense, billowing clouds of steam
blasted up towards the night sky and obliterated everything. The stench of wet
wood, stale water, and old, damp earth was amazing, and I held my breath for a
minute to let it pass. The doors on the Escalade opened, though the interior
lights did not come on. Two sets of feet thudded against the frozen ground,
clearly audible over the popping of the dying bonfire. As far as dramatic
entrances went, the extinguishing of the bonfire couldn’t have served as a
better audio-visual aid for Paolo.
A tall, dark figure, very
lithe and graceful, next to one even taller who hulked over him moved through
the steamy darkness to come and stand by Denny’s side. The hulk looped one arm around
Denny’s waist, and I swear I heard the rush of Denny’s breath as he inhaled
sharply, then the moan as Denny disappeared from my strained vision only to
reappear a moment later, his lips bright and puffy, obviously kiss-swollen. Unexplained,
unreasoned jealousy swarmed over me and I tried to tamp it down.
“All right, Paolo is here
and he’s going to do one demonstration. Just one. If he stays afterwards, no questions.
Anyone who bugs him gets banned from coming back, got it?” Denny was almost
forceful now. Amazing what a little tongue can do for a shy boy. I fought the
need to reach down and readjust my cock in my tight leather pants. Five minutes
ago I’d been freezing. Now my skin was on fire, my heart raced, and my breath
came in little pants.
Denny walked a short
distance away with the driver from the Escalade, and I could see enough to know
that he was being thoroughly groped and well kissed. Good for Denny, I thought.
He needed it. Insatiable little power bottom would end up a real pig if someone
didn’t take him in hand and treat him like the bitch he was begging to be for
somebody.
My attention wasn’t on
Denny and his stupid antics anymore, though. Now that the fire was gone and the
headlights of the Escalade winked into nothingness, the only light we had to
see by was the half moon and the stars, which were unusually bright out here in
Nowhere. A tall wisp of darkness within the night, his black hair gleaming
under the moon and his dark eyes catching the starlight like ebon gems, Paolo
stood before us, his hands clasped in front of him as though he prayed. The
group of us stood in our lines the way Denny arranged us, utterly silent.
Paolo dressed all in
black: bondage pants, heeled boots that buckled to the knee, a black shirt the
clung to his torso, and a long, heavy, Australian Outback-style leather trench
coat. He had black hair that curled riotously around his ears and face,
faunlike, thick and luscious. What he didn’t wear in the icy weather was a pair
of gloves; his hands were bare. He took a long, slow deep breath, his shoulders
rising and falling with it. My pulse sped. I’d watched this so many times. I
was addicted to this man and I didn’t know why.
At that instant, his head
snapped up and his dark eyes locked with mine. His hands came up in that
prayerful pose and his odd, raspy voice whispered the same word he always said.
“Hořet.”
He pulled his hands apart
and once again, Paolo Strakos cupped pure blue flames in his hands. Only this
time he did it while staring straight into my eyes. My heart raced, my blood
pounding frantically through my vessels. I wasn’t sure how that was possible. I
thought all the blood in my body was in my dick; it felt like it was going to
bust right out of the front of my leather pants.
I read the whole chapter on GA- oh my god, was that hot... and cold. I love these two, and I'm guessing they're going to pass through a bunch of trials before they reach the end which will be hopefully happy. Nice writing.
ReplyDeleteReally sexy, loved it. Hope you do a follow up.
ReplyDelete-Katie
Wow. That story is fantastic! Such an original premise, and I really enjoyed it. I'll definitely be watching for further chapters!
ReplyDeleteScottie
I loved it.
ReplyDeleteNow *there* is the creative, imaginative, passionate and well crafted writing that had me hooked on you. *That* is why I tried to keep track of your writing on Lit and was so happy you started your own blog, and that I found it.
This story has all the elements that keep me reading. I think it is really bigger than a blog and eventually needs to be expanded and extended and published. I hope that you will nurse it and write it with care and that we will eventually see it published.I will be first in line.
You and NightTempest are definitely on my short list that I check at least once daily.
Please don't be discouraged by thiefs and naysayers. You have a gift that can't be denied.
You have a following that appreciates your hard work and talent. I will be waiting for more.
Starnite.